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Post  Guest Mon Jun 27, 2011 11:26 pm

Sorry if poems arent allowed in the "Story" forum. :/ Please share your opinions on my work! What I can fix and all that good stuff. :) Thanks!
~Rippletail

You have grown apart from me,
When our friendship was as unchanging as the sea.
Never faltered over time,
Pure as the whispers of a wind chime.
How could it have gotten so sour?
And it grows worse by the hour.
We could have been friends till we got old,
Without your friendship my life has gone cold.
Never been apart out whole life,
Your absence is killing me, sharp like a knife.
We grow apart more each year,
Our friendship falls like a heavy tear.
I wish you would open the gate,
Then maybe my soul wouldnt be death's to take.

Color fades as life goes on,
Fainter and fainter if the birds song.
How can I go on living this life,
When every turn if full of strife.
Happy thoughts were in my head,
But these last few days turned them into dread.
He turned his back and walked away,
The happiness I had didn't stay.
Days go by in a noiseless nothing,
Sometimes I wish he would turn and say something.
For my love I thought he was trying,
It hurt when I found he was lying.
How can I look at the furture before me,
When I am stuck in the past, In the middle of the sea.

The color returns and I am full of hope,
These days are becoming easier to cope.
Someone new walked into my life,
As the darkness fled, so did the strife.
He brightened my life like the morning sun,
And I know good days are now to come.
He speaks to me and his words are kind,
In my dreams he is only mine.
Texting and texting, all day, all night,
He likes me, He loves me? I think he might.
I jump forward to see him in the morning,
When my eyes spot him, my soul goes soaring.
He sees me and smiles as his eyes meet mine,
And he is the reason I am writing this rhyme.

The Rose
(First poem I ever wrote)
It grows in the springtime sun,
Ansering the song the birds have sung.
It blooms and whithers and falls to the ground,
To grow just as beautiful next time around.

The Dream
Wrote this about a year ago
It was a bright and sunny day,
The afternoon of a Floridian May.
My smile comes easily to my lips,
As I fell him place his hands on my hips.
I look up and wait his kiss,
I feel it lightly but it turns to mist.
My eyes open as the dream fades away,
And I'm left alone to face another day.


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Post  Fire-Wolf Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:11 pm

they are really good
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Post  Guest Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:13 pm

Tankies. XD
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Post  Supa-Bacon-Cat Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:21 pm

those are really good!!!! :)
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Post  Fire-Wolf Tue Jun 28, 2011 11:55 pm

welcome
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Post  Guest Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:19 am

There are maximum awesomeness = )
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Post  Guest Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:23 am

Thanks! :) I wasnt sure if others would think they were good. i know they are amaturish but..... lol
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