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Raven Lead You Astray

Post  Wolves-Rule1 on Sat Jun 23, 2012 9:12 pm

Wrote this in less then five min! It's second person man.

You all ran with your long flowing fur. You chased your pray to the ground. Feeding on what you fought so hard for. Once you all had your fill. You took turns cleaning each others fur. Your brown coats caked is the blood of your kill. You curled into a ball with the rest of you and soon drifted off the sleep. You drempt of the life you once had. Roaming the huge land, you once owned. With the green grass you love to play in, and the animals you loved to eat. The sun then rose and you awoke with a sigh. Finding what you were seeing was merely. You stood and looked around at the rest, shaking your coat of water.

You trotted off to the river, where you sat staring at the clear blue steer. You watched as the fish swam. You lowered your head to the water and lapped up the cool liquid. You lifted your head to look to the sky as your friend the raven flew over head. You once again stood and took off running. Howling up at the bird who was such a good friend. You stopped to look around seeing that you were somewhere you had never been before. Your friend raven flew off into the trees, leaving you lost in the unfamiliar terrain.

Your blue eyes became scared and you threw your head back in a howl, but you were to far for the rest of you to hear. You looked around not seeing anything you knew. You slowly trotted the way you thought you came. But soon you became more lost. Leafless trees all around you. Your little ears fell back. Where were you? That you did not know. You found a hollow tree and curled up into it. Your friend the raven had lead you astray. You were now left out in the cold snow, away from the rest of you. Why would raven do such a thing?

After three weeks in the cold of the woods. You became weak and stopped under a leafless willow. You hadn't ate in so long, since the night with the rest of you. Your eyes closed and you prayed. Prayed for God to take you now. You could take this any ore. You body was starting to give out on you and your eyes were playing tricks. maybe raven was not as good as you though he was. You opened you eyes to see raven infront of you. But this raven was no the raven you knew, this raven was tinted with red. You knew just what this ment.

The rest of you would tell storys of the bird that came when your time had come. Your eyes slipped closed again. You let out one last weak howl. Before you slipped into the darkness. You were now free to roam all the land you wanted. You found the rest of you, but you were no longer walking the each, your soul was now free to blow in the wind. Or fly with the raven.

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Re: Raven Lead You Astray

Post  ScarletTheKitty on Sun Jun 24, 2012 5:27 pm

Nice :)

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Post  Wolves-Rule1 on Thu Sep 06, 2012 5:47 pm

Really? Thank you, it was just an out of the blue like five minuet story. =P
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Post  ScarletTheKitty on Sat Sep 08, 2012 3:22 pm

Lol well it was a goood five minute story xD I'm actually working on one of my own right now...But it won't be done in five minutes and I suck at second person Evil or Very Mad xP It's about...uhhh..actually, I don't quite know yet. It's gunna be something about someone who gets lost on an island. But with a few twists. I think. Like I said, I have'nt quite come up with the whole theme yet.

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